yeah ppl said the most important things... i try to be constructive.
Do some more legit 1v1 or 1v2, the footage is just you with some other alliance, and no heal when they need you.
No editing, maybe try to google how to do it with your editing program or ask Flare.
And it's too short. Since there is no good footage at all, it's just a 3/10 like the others.
The only ppl rating you good here are either accounts made by yourself or ingame friends.